You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to inform you about the problems which I am facing because of my roommate.
I am a final year student of Master of Computer Application whereas my roommate is fresher and we are living in double seater, Rani Laxmi Bai Girls hostel in 252 room number. She is not at all serious about her studies and responsibilities. I talked to her very calmly and tried to make her understood but all was in vain. I am unable to concentrate on my study which is impacting my performance.
Firstly, she creates a lot of mess in the room by throwing rappers here and there. She never cleans the room and when I ask her to clean, she starts giving lame excuses. This is not enough, she fond of music and hence plays loud music at night and sometimes plays guitar also. All these activities disturb my sleep and study. She even borrows my things without asking me which is a quite annoying and unacceptable act.
I would like to request for a single-seater room for me either inside the college or outside college but nearby. I cannot compromise with my studies and the future and need to concentrate more on studies as I have a very important examination next month.
I will be very thankful to you if consider this matter seriously and waiting for your response.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...sic at night and sometimes plays guitar also. All these activities disturb my sleep...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y important examination next month. I will be very thankful to you if conside...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6170212766 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65357962661 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621276595745 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8861578681 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172700975814 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052623950044 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463035277386 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106129547388 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485586177943 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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