You live in a room in college which you share with another student. There are many problems With this arrangement and you find it difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:
Describe the situation
Explain the problems and why is it difficult to work
Say how you would like the situation resolved
Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing to make a complaint about my roommate
I am extremely grateful for the place you have provided for me. However, I am experiencing a number problems with my roommate. Each time I arrive, I notice that he has invited some of his friends without informing me in advance. Consequently, all the food that I have put in the refrigerator for my dinner for the next day, will be vanished. This is quite unpleasant and getting you out of my control.
The first concern is my privacy. It is not clear to me what types of people are in the room and whenever I am here trying to either do my my project or relax, they make noise and make the situation difficult for me. To make matter worse, I cannot afford to rent a flat of my own at this time. I have tried so hard To get on well with him but I am very disappointed.
To resolve the problem I would appreciate it if you could either change My room or provide a smaller place with no roommate as I was originally promised.
Yours faithfully,
Nima Tavakoli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: my
... whenever I am here trying to either do my my project or relax, they make noise and m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35897435897 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6331869416 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6419454395 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2727272727 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132031881695 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528797717132 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502391313548 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870629830964 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428513192992 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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