You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request a change of my hostel room, owing to the disturbances created by the roommate.
Currently, I am sharing a hostel room with a final year student. Due to his seniority, he behaves adamantly and is not co-operative in any manner. Moreover, he has a careless approach toward everything.
Firstly, he always leaves the room door open, irrespective of day and night, which is a severe security breach. Secondly, the room is mostly occupied with his friends, who adds on to the issues, by smoking and drinking inside the room. Consequently, all these affect my studies, as my concentration is highly impacted in such an agonizing environment.
Therefore, I would prefer to move to a single bed hostel room, so I can focus properly on this semester exams. Also, I would like to have a room on the top floor, as it is mostly vacant and quiet enough to study.
Looking forward to being allocated to a new room.
Thanks,
Jame Trinester
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81976744186 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82648444752 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2451058215 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3636363636 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126391891624 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431993961345 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472429520324 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066388017076 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234659372839 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.