You missed an appointment Write a letter explaining what happened In your letter include what the appointment was a apology for missing the appointment a request to reschedule

Essay topics:

You missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what happened. In your letter include:
what the appointment was
a apology for missing the appointment
a request to reschedule

Dear Madam,

I like to apologize for missing my dental cleaning appointment at 11 am on Monday, 4th of July. Please allow me to explain the reasons for not showing up for my appointment.

As you remember, I have a 4 year old daughter named Sara, who just started attending preschool. On the day of the appointment, I dropped her off to her preschool and was en-route for my dental cleaning appointment. On my way, I got a call from one of the teachers from the preschool to tell me that Sara had just slipped during their play-time and had started bleeding from her nose. I immediately went back to the preschool to take her to the hospital so that she gets immediate medical attention. Due to all this, I was also unable to call your receptionist to cancel my appointment and try to reschedule it. I am extremely sorry to keep you waiting your precious time. But, I had to take care of my daughter and hence could not show up on my appointment time.

I hope you understand my situation as a fellow parent and forgive me. I would like to reschedule our appointment to another day whenever you are free during the next week.

Yours Sincerely,
Nitin

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76019651606 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3616388175 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151554767664 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607493102741 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431817956828 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117386715073 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499901970533 0.0580467560999 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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