Some people think that teenagers should focus on all school subjects while others believe they should just concentrate on the subjects that they are better at or they find the most interesting. what is your opinion?
Today, the field of education has widely expanded into various territories. The amount of knowledge and learning out there is astronomical. Hence, there is a debate whether teenagers should focus on single or multiple subjects. This essay will describe the above idea and provide details on both sides of the argument.
There are couple of reasons why students could concentrate on single subjects. Firstly, they are well aware of their interests and hobbies and would love to study in depth about it. Secondly, it provides them an opportunity to pay attention to their strengths and become successful in a single area.For example, enterprenuers today achieve success by focusing on a single domain. Thus, teenagers can benefit from taking classes which interest them.
On the other hand, taking a handful of subjects can limit a person's general knowledge. He would stay behind his or her peers not only in worldly knowledge but also in moral and social empathy. The individual will never gain complete perspective as they will possibly fail to discover better subjects. For instance, Chinese schools have all subjects in their 10 year education curriculum. This helps them to have a balanced view. Therefore, there are several advantages of having vast curriculum.
In summary, I agree to some extent that teenagers should have the freedom of molding their own destiny with their specialties areas. But, I also feel that at an early age, they need to take full array of subject-area to explore their options.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... and become successful in a single area.For example, enterprenuers today achieve su...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
... taking a handful of subjects can limit a persons general knowledge. He would stay behind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18292682927 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66953110582 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678861788618 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2494867662 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6875 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187718102256 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489123941523 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494066193762 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103816931278 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414078775392 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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