You ordered a new chequebook from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the chequebook. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to claim about my recent order of a new cheque book from your bank.
Two weeks ago, realizing that my cheques would be depleted within a few days, I went to the cheque department in your bank and requested a new cheque book. At first, I was told to go into the bank's website and filled in some forms with my current address and phone number. there was a section called "Prioritization" in which I mentioned that I would be in need of the new cheque book urgently and upon checked out, I was prompted to pay an additional fee of $50 for this priority service with an email confirming that I would receive the cheques within 1 weeks.
Unfortunately, it has been 1 month since that day and I haven't received any cheque or any information about when I will receive it. I has followed up with some calls to the hotline but they all mentioned that there might be delay due to online approval processes. At the moment, I am very disappointed because I has been unable to pay this month's salaries to my employees.
Therefore, I would like to ask you to look into this matter urgently and let me know exactly when my order will be completed. Moreover, I would like to insist that this problem must be solved within this week.
Look forward to receiving your prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
Tuan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'banks'' or 'bank's'?
Suggestion: banks'; bank's
...ok. At first, I was told to go into the banks website and filled in some forms with m...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...th my current address and phone number. there was a section called 'Prioritizati...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...t has been 1 month since that day and I havent received any cheque or any information ...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 135, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...rmation about when I will receive it. I has followed up with some calls to the hotl...
^^^
Line 13, column 313, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...oment, I am very disappointed because I has been unable to pay this months salaries...
^^^
Line 13, column 336, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ointed because I has been unable to pay this months salaries to my employees. T...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, moreover, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64081632653 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79978579534 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583673469388 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5894042647 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.363636364 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146290245492 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058421550775 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563048495225 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906828247924 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460689844556 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.