You ordered two items from a company on the internet, but the things you received were not exactly the same as the things you ordered.
Write a letter to the manager of the company that sent the items. In your letter
- Explain what you ordered
- Describe the things you received
- Tell the manager of the company what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a regular customer of your Amazon online shopping website writing to bring to your attention about the wrong product I received yesterday from your website's people.
Let me describe things in detail. Last week, I ordered a mobile phone belonging to the Apple company in your website which costs about 35,000 rupees. In addition to this, I added a tempered glass and an acrylic metal case for the i phone and paid the entire amount online for the things I have purchased.
Although I ordered a cellular phone manufactured by Apple, unfortunately, it is the Samsung Galaxy S7 that I received. Being taken aback, I tried to reach your customer care executives. But to my bad luck, I was unable to reach them.
Would you please initiate a return pick up and provide the correct product. I would also request you to instruct your sellers to examine if the correct products are dispatched to the customers. If the seller had paid attention, this issue could have been eradicated. I hope you would take my problem into account and solve things without procrastination.
Looking forward for the return pick up. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Gayathri Mohandas.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-24 | gayathri subarshan | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'i'?
Suggestion: the; i
...red glass and an acrylic metal case for the i phone and paid the entire amount online...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 231, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...glass and an acrylic metal case for the i phone and paid the entire amount online...
^
Line 13, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have purchased. Although I ordered a cellular phone manufactured by Apple, ...
^^
Line 13, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... unfortunately, it is the Samsung Galaxy S7 that I received. Being taken aback, I...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04411764706 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73824424505 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3474456781 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221133982328 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707559967301 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585963146659 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103017820825 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410614990381 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.