You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear Smith,
How's it going, hope you're getting better and the hospital are treating you well. I am writing to tell you about the semi-final match we played today.
Victory was ours after a pulsating match. it wasn't an easy match as most of us thought it would be, to be fair Cali football club did give us a tough game. they weren't ready to give up without a fight, but at the end, we still won with score of 2-1. Goals from Paul and Salas gave us the win.
it was a perfect weather today. The sun was smiling down on us, but it wasn't that hot, these made it possible for people to come in mass to see the game.
I think that overall it was a breath-taking match. The support from both set of supporters were amazing, they were singing non-stop from start till finish. The only negative from the match was the performance of the match officials, to put it mildly, they were poor.
get well soon,
Romeo Winchester
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Smith, Hows it going, hope youre getting bette...
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Dear Smith, Hows it going, hope youre getting better and...
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Dear Smith, Hows it going, hope youre getting better and the hospital are tre...
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...ctory was ours after a pulsating match. it wasnt an easy match as most of us thoug...
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...ry was ours after a pulsating match. it wasnt an easy match as most of us thought it ...
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...football club did give us a tough game. they werent ready to give up without a fight...
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...all club did give us a tough game. they werent ready to give up without a fight, but a...
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...rom Paul and Salas gave us the win. it was a perfect weather today. The sun wa...
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... The sun was smiling down on us, but it wasnt that hot, these made it possible for pe...
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...people to come in mass to see the game. I think that overall it was a breath-tak...
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..., to put it mildly, they were poor. get well soon, Romeo Winchester
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...ldly, they were poor. get well soon, Romeo Winchester
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39884393064 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15888022078 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676300578035 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7705618234 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4166666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131849089867 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465960655172 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730134976789 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892849332011 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107419348646 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.