Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing well and getting heal quickly in the hospital. Also, I and the other players missed you in the finals match against Australia.
As you know, we played our final cricket match against one of the toughest teams in the world. We didn't have our chances to win because we lost you. After all, you were caught in an accident. Surprisingly, we found your replacement which was a miracle young boy who has played furiously against the Australian players and bought the winning cup for our country.
Let me tell you more about the match. The weather was hot and humid. It was very difficult to play for our team members in such kind of weather because they did not have the stamina like you and me since we have the ample amount of experience to hold our stamina in this hot weather. Thus, I came up with a solution by ordering the energy drinks for our players that we usually prepare for us to keep hold of our stand in the hot weather. I think this could also be the reason for winning because it is very important to save every single run by a fielder to win a cricket match against the batting team.
Apart from this, the match was thrilling, exciting, and quite a nervous feeling because I felt your absence and guidance to win the game since we both come up with the winning strategies to build confidence. So, I was losing the confidence but somehow that miracle boy of our team members stayed up against the Australian players and our team end up winning. I wished you could have seen the moment, but I have sent highlights of the match with this letter. I just want you to know the feeling of winning the World Cup trophy for our nation
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... of the toughest teams in the world. We didnt have our chances to win because we lost...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, well, after all, apart from, i think, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 319.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47962382445 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2566091517 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529780564263 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4720147201 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2666666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197644310062 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078298050238 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541575008857 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122817615536 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229205100694 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... of the toughest teams in the world. We didnt have our chances to win because we lost...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, well, after all, apart from, i think, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 319.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47962382445 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2566091517 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529780564263 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4720147201 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2666666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197644310062 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078298050238 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541575008857 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122817615536 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229205100694 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.