To succeed in a business, one needs to know maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Knowledge of numbers has contributed to the success of entrepreneurs. While this notion may be reasonable for some businessmen, I believe that for many successful companies nowadays, employers do not need to do calculations themselves.
Apparently, basic fundamental skills of maths play an integral role in operating a business, and there are two reasons to substantiate it. Firstly, an enormous number of calculations have to be conducted to determine the prices of products that are both appealing to buyers and sufficient to make the business financially healthy. Without the financial counting of all expenditures, the businessman can easily be overcharged or undercharged customers for his services or goods. Secondly, to maximize the profits, the owner needs to make the system as cost-efficient as possible. To do this, he or she needs statistical knowledge to make decisions of where and how capital should be allocated.
However, in my viewpoint, if numerical skills are not one's forte it does not mean that he or she can run a successful business. The first reason for my argument is that employers can hire trusted employees to take charge of the accounting job. In the corporate world, it is common that the business owner is not the one who works with figures in his company as they hire accountants to take care of such kind of work. Another compelling reason is that delegating the bookkeeping work to subordinates might be an advisable practice. By doing this, the entrepreneurs can save time and cognitive space for important decisions such as launching new products or coming up with new business ideas.
By way of conclusion, although it is true that general skills of maths could be vital for a business to prosper, I do not think that a business owner needs to adept the mathematical experience as they can hire a wise bookkeeper to do the job, so, the owners can come up with new strategies to make their business success in terms of expansion and growth.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... viewpoint, if numerical skills are not ones forte it does not mean that he or she c...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, kind of, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03636363636 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06789411296 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6979413821 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150223840326 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487085169081 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04531318222 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101206613111 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354919573593 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... viewpoint, if numerical skills are not ones forte it does not mean that he or she c...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, kind of, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03636363636 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06789411296 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6979413821 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150223840326 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487085169081 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04531318222 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101206613111 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354919573593 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.