You received a letter from your friend informing you that his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advice on - which places they should visit, - where should they live, - invite them to do something with you.
Dear Shane,
It was a delightful surprise for me to receive your letter after such a long time. I’m happy to know that your grandparents are coming to Kerala, India. It is very nice to know that in your country, even retired people like to travel and explore.
There are lots of places to visit here in India. I would suggest them to visit backwater of Kerala, which help them to rejuvenate and rejoice their retired life. There are many hill stations to enjoy the peaceful atmosphere even famous Padmanabhaswamy temple, which is said to the wealthiest temple in the world with the recent finding of treasure from it and many more. If you send me their itinerary, I could plan their time here as well.
As far as the stay is concerned, there are many good hotels of government which are affordable and pretty decent but they have to be booked well in advance. However, I would be pleased if they stay with me at my home. I can take them and show around. My parents too join with me to invite them to our family. We shall also enjoy the holidaying with them.
Hoping to see your grandparents soon!
Yours lovingly,
Rahul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to join'?
Suggestion: to join
...n take them and show around. My parents too join with me to invite them to our family. W...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54411764706 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3957452594 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.456613633 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3076923077 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272305272383 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839254403663 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349622744396 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133546592705 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252194324733 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.