You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home,
you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
• say where you think you left the papers
• explain why they are so important
• tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am writing to request your assistance in locating some important papers which I believe were left at your hotel during my stay for a recent meeting.
If I recall correctly, the papers were left on the bedside table in room 204,which was the room in which I had been staying. These documents were inside a brown manilla envelope with the numbers ‘40613’ across the front.
It is of the utmost importance that papers are located since they are imperative to a business deal which is due to be concluded this weekend. If these files are not found, this deal will thoroughly jeopardised.
I regret that I have been so foolish as to misplace such vital documents, but I would be sincerely grateful if you could take all necessary means to assist in their location. Should these papers be found, please send them via express delivery to the attached address.
Thank you for your help. Your swift cooperation is greatly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Matthew Rainsbury
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 200, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'jeopardise'
Suggestion: jeopardise
...re not found, this deal will thoroughly jeopardised. I regret that I have been so fool...
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Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Matthew Rainsbury
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73845106384 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696428571429 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5772236554 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231115832672 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761468137646 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694588532177 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115930224657 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058942359038 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.