You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Dear sir,
First, I would like to express my gratitude for the great service received during our workshop today, it was impressive how you managed to get everything right and accommodate our huge group in one conference room.
Secondly, I want to tell you that I noticed while arriving at home, that I left some important papers in one of the hotel facilities. I think I left my documents in the small meeting room just beside the front desk. I recalled that because I was looking for quite room for a quick call with my manager.
I feel stressed for those papers because they contain vital and important information about our company sales for the next years. That paper needs to be signed by the company's general manager tomorrow morning. In addition to that I need to prepare some additional information based on those papers, therefore the urgency to get them as soon as possible.
As mentioned and due to the urgency for this event, would you please go to the room meeting mentioned above and look for my documents, you will notice them immediately because the cover is in orange and yellow. Once you have them, please call me immediately to make sure you have it, then I will arrange some one to collect them and bring them back to my home. Another option is that you keep them in a safe place while I am heading to your facilities. This option can take some hours since I live 100 km away from the hotel venue.
Hope this is not causing any inconvenience to you and your staff.
Thank you so much for your support and assistance.
Kind regards,
Phillip
Mobile Number 321487654
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, First, I would like to express my gratit...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...room for a quick call with my manager. I feel stressed for those papers because ...
^
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...e sure you have it, then I will arrange some one to collect them and bring them back to ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gards, Phillip Mobile Number 321487654
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, i feel, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 284.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62323943662 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44099938152 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6263052265 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316974269741 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109170811298 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965160168253 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141227616886 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856039456371 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.