Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The technology is widely spreading in multiple fields nowadays. This has raised great concerns as it became increasingly central in the educational system.
However, I disagree that technology will edge teachers out of the classroom in the near future. A machine assuming the role of a teacher is totally unthinkable since it has no deep connections with the human world, and a politic aiming to replace human beings with robots would send a negative message to students who will be in the job market in a couple of years.
Firstly, a teacher is a human with feelings and thoughts. In the classroom, his mission is to transmit knowledge to a multitude of students with different backgrounds. Latest neurosciences studies have demonstrated that learning is a combination of thought and perception. For example, a physical phenomenon or an episode of the world war II will be perceived differently whether the learner is visual, kinesthetic or auditory. Moreover, Scientists agree that this subtlety is specific to mankind and the duty of a tutor is to find out the best way to pass knowledge to his students.
Secondly, people are even more afraid of technology influence when it comes to the job market. In a recent survey conducted by Forbes Magazine, more that 60% of the American Students think that the increasing use of technology will be a threat for their job security in future. An example to illustrate this, a photomontage which had been circulating on Facebook last year. The first picture shows a cameraman filming migrating birds on helicopter. On the second one, a drone doing the same activity is seen with a message saying: “In less than 10 years the pilot and the cameraman lost their respective jobs”. Therefore, it will be difficult to motivate students to learn while the general climate indicates that machines are taking over in different sectors.
In summary, a robotic teacher lacks basic perceptions to establish a real connection with students as they go through the learning process. Measures and politics aiming to replace persons by Artificial Intelligence in the classroom will never be popular within the society.
As explained above, it is clear that machines will not replace human teachers in the forthcoming future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
...of students with different backgrounds. Latest neurosciences studies have demonstrated...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...will be a threat for their job security in future. An example to illustrate this, a photo...
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Line 7, column 674, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to while'
Suggestion: to while
...difficult to motivate students to learn while the general climate indicates that mach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12972972973 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91017207979 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578378378378 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5916659665 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255292144731 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733963816759 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535124184399 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128652452929 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382359501672 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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