Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Deforestation is an environmental (natural ) tragedy that can be done for myriad reasons.This can be done for commercial , agricultural and infrastructural purposes which has an impact on the environment and the natural habitats .Humans have to be wary of the harmfulness of logging.This essay would\ should suggest a number of (an array of ) solutions to overcome this.
First of all , people have to be cautious of the problems caused by cutting off the trees and the impact of it in many aspects.(Thus,) both aquatic and terrestrial animals are relying on the trees and the vegetation around but ,(however) with the activity of deforestation these creatures are becoming endangered and in this case we will anticipate another issue to be emerged which is lack of biodiversity .Moreover, trees can provide a natural defense against air pollution and mild natural disasters by limiting the releasing of carbon dioxide on the air and perishing the trees will maintain the pollutant air.Nevertheless,there are an essential ways and solutions for the deforestation.
On the other hand , this environmental phenomenon can be solved by putting more emphasis on the importance of recycling on our environment.For instance , schools and institutions should provide recycling pins and do educational workshops on this for students and the employees.Furthermore,the government should raise awareness on self-planting activities at home and take decisive actions to abolish ( banish) (limit ) deforestation by instituting campagnes and arrange ecoutriourst trips for the public thus, it is clear that deforestation has an impact of our environment but there are a plethora of ways to limit it.
To recapitulate, the process of logging the trees can be harmful for the environment.However,There are various reasons related to this which are; agricultural, infrastructural and commercial and it can be overcome by raising awareness through school and institutions with taking serious governmental actions\ decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63907284768 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7887375793 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543046357616 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.509208198 49.4020404114 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 425.75 106.682146367 399% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.5 20.7667163134 364% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.25 7.06120827912 400% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286120235732 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169375660629 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262013895647 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169375660629 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262013895647 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.9 13.0946893788 328% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.57 50.2224549098 -43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 11.3001002004 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.62 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.11 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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