Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money Write a letter to the local council In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisu

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Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council.
In your letter • give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre • explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community • describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear Sir

How is your work? I live in Hornchurch Ravenscourt Grove RM12 6 HS. I hear our local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.

I live in Hornchurch and the local council in there and they are thinking of closing a sport center.This is wrong though. There are many people and my family and my friends are living there. I and my family and my friends use the sports center every day. The local sports center for us is a very important center. Sport center my favourite center. It is my activities and my hobby. My sister and brother going to center every morning and I am going to center every evening. The sport center very important for me and Hornchurch city people’s.

Please do not t closing the sport center. Maybe we can helping for sport center save many. I ask you to think again.

Sincerely Ahmet

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...a very important center. Sport center my favourite center. It is my activities an...
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...evening. The sport center very important for me and Hornchurch city people’s. ...
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...or me and Hornchurch city people’s. Please do not t closing the sport cente...
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... Hornchurch city people’s. Please do not t closing the sport center. Maybe...
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...t closing the sport center. Maybe we can helping for sport center save many. I a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55625 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41252428744 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0818143661 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.0714285714 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4285714286 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.214285714286 4.34317383033 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240768449758 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914364943283 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102835119319 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217115731562 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134209214647 0.0580467560999 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.98 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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