You recently attended a meeting at a hotel.When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
-Say where you think you left the papers
-Explain why they are so important
-Tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in relation to a series of documents that I forgot to bring on my way back home, I am hoping that you would be able to retrieve those papers back for me.
Currently, I'm out of town on a business trip and I believe that my blue Binder was last seen in conference room 1 at the front desk.
The Binder consisted of an important research proposal, that was supposed to be submitted this week to my manager. But, was delayed as a result of this incident. I hope that you would be able to find the Binder.I will be able to have my Assistant submit the documents as early as next week.
My Assistant Maddie should drop by next evening to collect the binder. I am hoping that the staff members would be able to find the missing binder. I am waiting to hear back from you!
Yours faithfully,
Mike Perry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...those papers back for me. Currently, Im out of town on a business trip and I be...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...at you would be able to find the Binder.I will be able to have my Assistant submi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37579617834 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40116406514 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5233391798 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116170793198 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502781480373 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537908684204 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071323385732 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315916089166 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.