you recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to shop manager. In your letter
1. describe the problem with the equipment
2. explain what happened when you phoned the shop
3. say what you would line the manager to do
Dated: 29 July, 2017
Respected Sir,
Subject line: Request for replacement of faulty Pressure cooker from Al- Rehman Utensil store
Greetings Sir, I hope the state missive finds you in the very best. It’s imperative to impart the notion that this letter entails a request for early replacement for faulty pressure cooker. Which was purchased from your shop on dated July the 18th, 2017. The reasons for the aforestated request are highlighted here under.
To begin with, it’s faulty equipment and does not perform the steaming very well. Furthermore, it often starts leaking the gas inside prior reaching the desired level. The said faults were identified on the very first day of purchase. For which, I had contacted your shop over phone but the staff was not cooperative and they did not guide me properly for registering my complaint and rather advocated the qualities of this branded equipment.
In summation, I shall be grateful on my part if the request supra can kindly be accommodated and this faulty device can be replaced within couple of days. Hope to hearing from you real soon. Many thanks for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Aatif Imtiaz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2017'.
Suggestion: July 2017
Dated: 29 July, 2017 Respected Sir, Subject line: Request ...
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Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ks for your time. Yours sincerely, Aatif Imtiaz
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15625 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50829786104 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1365922066 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188078548507 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664150394606 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529504866233 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783860847915 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061314422751 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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