You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues.
In your letter:
remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was
thank them for the card and gift
explain why you like the gift and how you will use it
Dear Mia and Anna,
I am writing to express my gratitude for sending me your best wishes on my wedding anniversary.
With regard to the occasion, My husband and I celebrated our first wedding anniversary on February 2nd to cherish one remarkable year of our married life. To make it more special, we invited close relatives to the cake cutting ceremony to accompany us.
I am glad to receive such a lovely card and a present from you on this auspicious occasion. It means a lot to me and I would like to thank you for this pleasant surprise, and for making my day so special.
As for the gift, it was wrapped elegantly and I found this graceful Rolex watch upon unwrapping it. I would like to appreciate your choice of gift, specifically its design with stainless steel bracelet and a black bezel, which I like the most. I would definitely wear it on formal occasions.
I would like to thank you once again for your kind greetings and this precious gift.
Kind regards,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...initely wear it on formal occasions. I would like to thank you once again for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, as for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67045454545 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61333990414 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6440163544 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167944039872 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586429556967 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462460878243 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952209508961 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315947732772 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.