You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues.
In your letter:
remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was
thank them for the card and gift
explain why you like the gift and how you will use it
Dear rahi,
Hope! You are doing great at your office work and accomplishing your weekly targets. I’m writing to express my gratitude toowars your kind gesture of sending gift hamper and cards on my grand parents’ wedding anniversary. I received your parcels on the same day of the ceremony and it really amazed me how you managed to remember the special day?
Indeed, not only did I appreciate your efforts, but my grandparents adored your gifts the most . Great thanks on their behalf! They specially told me to mentioned that the video you all created was splendid as watching that made our day. Honestly saying, tears were at verge after reading the heart touching lines mentioned on the card .
Having said that , I just want to mention that the card is sitting at grandma’s shelve and we have chosen pictures from the video to print them out .
I would have never expected such emotional messages from you . Really thanks for the surprise.
Yours’ truly ,
Savi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear rahi, Hope! You are doing great at your office...
^^^
Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... grandparents adored your gifts the most . Great thanks on their behalf! They spec...
^^
Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...art touching lines mentioned on the card . Having said that , I just want to me...
^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tioned on the card . Having said that , I just want to mention that the card is...
^^
Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'grandmas'.
Suggestion: grandmas
... to mention that the card is sitting at grandma’s shelve and we have chosen pictures from...
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Line 6, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ictures from the video to print them out . I would have never expected such emo...
^^
Line 8, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...xpected such emotional messages from you . Really thanks for the surprise. Yours’...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Yours
... you . Really thanks for the surprise. Yours’ truly , Savi
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y thanks for the surprise. Yours’ truly , Savi
^^
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for the surprise. Yours’ truly , Savi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, if, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95757575758 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46139788173 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0669246638 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321041675566 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121102772311 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842111042796 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151575790104 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112322528871 0.0580467560999 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.