You recently encountered some problems with public transportation service in your area. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say,
What are the problems?
Explain how these problems affect the public
Suggest what changes could be made to improve the situation
Dear Sir/Ma'am,
I am writing this letter to complain you about the adversities which are faced by public transport users in my vicinity.
There are several problems which I would like to inform you. Firstly, behavior of the drivers is very rude with the passengers. Secondly, bus is not coming as per the time-table published by your company. Therefore, I think these issues should be addressed.
I would like to elucidate that harsh behavior of your staff creates conflicts between commuters and your employees. In addition to that, people unable to reach at their work-place on time due to which they have to suffer a lot.
Few things I would like to recommend you as a solution. Firstly, training should be organized in your company to teach your staff that how to behave appropriately with customers. Secondly, penalty should be charged from the driver who come late from the given time.
I hope, you will think about these problems and reply me at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Mohit Ratnu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07647058824 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66973943495 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664705882353 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3487329179 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9166666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212347018591 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691300460157 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540912225662 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116992844211 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482451082901 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.