You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company.
In your letter
give the details of the flight
explain what the problem with the food was
say what the airline should do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection to a terrible experience on your plane recently. The flight I took was from Toronto to Beijing departing at 8:00am, 25th February, Flight Number CD2832. And my ticket confirmation number is WJL0821.
There were several meals served on this flight and the chicken noodles served at dinner time was not fresh. After a few minutes when I finished the noodles, I felt stomach and really uncomfortable. There was no strange smell or taste of the food and that is the reason why I could not tell it was not fresh until I finished them all. I had to stay in the restroom for quite a while before I felt a bit better.
I have been taking your company’s flights for plenty of times and I never had any issues with the food before, therefore I am really unsatisfied with this experience. I think you should contact the department that handles the meals on planes and let them be aware of this problem, so that they will check the food more carefully in the future and similar cases should be avoided. In addition, I want to see if you can provide me some credits that I can use to reserve tickets in the future as compensation for this matter.
I look forward to your response about this.
Yours sincerely,
Jerry Wang
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eally unsatisfied with this experience. I think you should contact the department...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58441558442 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49464109588 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627705627706 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5878430985 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226608029043 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06462796211 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059379699218 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113721369504 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543325414126 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.