You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed at their house.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank your friend for staying with them
Tell them what you enjoyed the most about the holiday
Explain you are sending photos of the holiday with the letter
Dear Abbas,
How are you my man? I hope everything is going well at your end.
I’m writing to you to tell you how thankful I am for letting me stay at your place. It has been a wonderful few days, perhaps the most beautiful thing about it was knowing that I have a friend who welcomes me in his house when needed.
The few days I spent with you were funny and extremely joyful, but the most superb thing was when you took me to that Indian restaurant, you know I have a thing towards spicy food, and that food was literally on fire! Koshary was the dish I enjoyed the most.
Annyway, I've been scrolling my phone and I found some photos of us during my stay and I think that you hadn’t seen it. So, I'm sending it over with this letter! I think it would remind us of the wonderful times we spent together. In the end, memories are what life is about, and a good memory is certainly worth saving!
Till our next meeting my friend.
Love,
Mohamed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 166, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[2]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knew'
Suggestion: knew
...rhaps the most beautiful thing about it was knowing that I have a friend who welcomes me in...
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Line 11, column 166, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...rhaps the most beautiful thing about it was knowing that I have a friend who welcomes me in...
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Line 19, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... dish I enjoyed the most. Annyway, Ive been scrolling my phone and I found som...
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Line 19, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...think that you hadn't seen it. So, Im sending it over with this letter! I thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43715846995 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18840008378 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7918671621 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343639566999 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118306235648 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902574570769 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171464500541 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718116739292 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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