Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists.
To what extent do you agree?
The value of scientists and technology developers has increasingly recognized among society. It has been argued by some that their importance exceeds that of artists and musicians. This essay will argue that expressing gratitude and appreciation toward scientists and technology experts is completely favourable without devaluing artists including musicians.
People in general have always valued those who make their life easier. Since scientists and technology specialists had contributed in much of modern societies welfare, many tend to place them in a higher status than other contributors such as artists including musicians. In a fast and practical world, this might seem more convenient and logical to many. Indeed, a series of studies conducted by Harvard University suggests that the more practical and professional the environment gets, the more that people tend to devalue fine arts and music and cherish the material and theoretical work of art produced by scientists and engineers. The previous mentioned studies might give us a hint about why some people favour scientists including technology experts over others.
Despite the importance of scientists and technology experts and the significant role they play in our modern world, artists and musicians influential role goes back deep in human history. Art in its many manifestations such as paintings, sculpture, and music has been a driving force for human imagination and abilities and is considered by many to be the predecessor from which all forms of sciences emerged. For example, the need to document a certain scene drove ancient societies to paint. The same motivation led to the development of the camera and thus another form of art emerged, photography. Music, on the other hand has been a reflection of social conditions. Throughout history, man played his tones singing about his beliefs, life and past events. This form of art, music, preserved a huge amount of historical events, myths and traditions throughout the ages till today.
To conclude, in my opinion, despite the deserved recognition of science and scientists and technology and its experts, artists and music performers are still highly valued and the public are still enjoying all sorts of arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, for example, in general, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46571428571 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90408438625 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574285714286 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1389787395 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203584655232 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588475763765 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524188226152 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115835394409 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441889277877 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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