You recently read an article in a newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
What is the article about?
What is the error?
What you expect an editor to do?
Dear Sir,
My name is Don Bradman and I am writing with regards to an error in an article, “Exercise for long age” that was published in your newspaper on October 20th which was written by my friend Gary Sobers.
The article was about the benefits of exercise towards living a healthy and fit lifestyle. Gary is an expert in the field of Health and Nutrition and he had laid out some very useful ideas for exercising at home for the elderly.
The article had erroneously mentioned Gary’s qualification as Junior Adviser to the national sports council, when he in fact is the Chief Consultant. He is one of the eminent experts in his field and such an error does not reflect well on his caliber and experience.
I request you to issue an apology and title correction in future edition, and if possible, re-publish the article again with the correct designation. I think it is the least we can do to show respect to our intellectuals and scholars.
Hoping for a swift resolution from your side upon receipt of this letter.
Yours faithfully,
John Doe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ation as Junior Adviser to the national sports council, when he in fact is the Chief C...
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Line 14, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s letter. Yours faithfully, John Doe
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as for, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79032258065 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69494308536 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682795698925 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0960651105 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155505894526 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521695187504 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432622320234 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728869313684 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327376027526 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.