Dear John,
I hope you are doing well. I'm writing this letter in response to your last letter, asking about the guidance you need for your near future. I would rather suggest you to go for job because your last academic result was not up to the mark, due to which you won't be able to get admission in best colleges.
However, you can get enrolled to an average college but I'm sure you won't love being there. You've already seen my elder brother who returned after spending merely 6 months in college. As I know, you are a fun loving guy and you definitely will not get there because I've heard that they just focus on taking exams and also don't have well educated faculties. Therefore, you only have to prepare yourself without expecting more from teachers.
So, getting a job is the best idea as you will definitely get experience which nowadays, most of the recruiters want to see in candidates CV. I would recommend you to go for technical post that can be more interesting and also have more opportunities to learn which could be more helpful in future as well.
I'm eagerly waiting to hear from you.
With love
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope you are doing well. Im writing th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ar John, I hope you are doing well. Im writing this letter in response to your...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...which you wont be able to get admission in best colleges. However, you can get enro...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... get enrolled to an average college but Im sure you wont love being there. Youve a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You've
... but Im sure you wont love being there. Youve already seen my elder brother who retur...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...u definitely will not get there because Ive heard that they just focus on taking ex...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hey just focus on taking exams and also dont have well educated faculties. Therefore...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d be more helpful in future as well. Im eagerly waiting to hear from you. Wi...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing to hear from you. With love Mark
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5637254902 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34165491712 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5500155303 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282516948886 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100707634572 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752700871443 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169658554982 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834775334945 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.