Dear Sam,
I received your letter regarding your dilemma about going to college or finding a job. To begin with, I wouldn’t recommend you to attend a college as you may not enjoy it very much given to your practical and introvert nature. As you think about things rationally and like to create your destiny, the college would be just a waste of resources for you.
Therefore, I'd suggest you look for a suitable job for now. Though you are destined to do great things, the college will help you in no way to achieve your goals. Moreover, you should support your family in these tragic times, they are facing after the demise of your father. If you decide to go to college at this time, it will worsen the financial condition of your family. Hence, it is significant that you take a job for now.
Furthermore, as you have always shown a keen interest in cars and auto parts, the job of a mechanic might be suitable for you. If you don’t know, where to look for such jobs, I can help you out here. However, if you are not interested in this type of work, you can always discuss your thoughts with me.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours sincerely,
Sumit Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...waste of resources for you. Therefore, Id suggest you look for a suitable job for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48372093023 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31308269229 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9577859295 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348449913783 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146933478382 0.0766984524023 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574824198829 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216240246377 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938917209043 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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