You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Raman,
I hope you are doing very well. Last week i received your letter and i came to know that you are confused that continuing study would provide more productive results for future career or it is better to find out a job. I would definitely recommend you to pursue a profession.
As you have completed your masters degree with accountant and business. It is the time to pursue a lucrative employment instead of enrolling for further studies. Although education plays an crucial role in getting a salaried job, practical skills are more demanding in every sector of life nowadays. Moreover, employers are looking for skills and abilities instead of theoretical knowledge in this competitive era. Also, you have been studying for a long period of time and more study would make you monotonous. Therefore, you should try to be employed for a position in the company.
If you will start a professional journey from now, it will give you valuable and extensive experience that will assist you in your career in upcoming time. Furthermore, if will allow you to experience real working conditions in the company that will make you able to encounter every situation and it will develop your problem solving and communication skills.
There are many jobs you can apply for such as accountant, sales representative, office administration and customer service. All these offers are related to your field of study and would help you in getting employment in a reputed company. I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration.
Warm wishes,
Sarbjeet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raman, I hope you are doing very well. Last wee...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hope you are doing very well. Last week i received your letter and i came to know...
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Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...l. Last week i received your letter and i came to know that you are confused that...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rther studies. Although education plays an crucial role in getting a salaried job,...
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Line 4, column 456, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...Also, you have been studying for a long period of time and more study would make you monotonou...
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Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...career in upcoming time. Furthermore, if will allow you to experience real workin...
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Line 6, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p your problem solving and communication skills. There are many jobs you can ...
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Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ken into consideration. Warm wishes, Sarbjeet
^^^
Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsideration. Warm wishes, Sarbjeet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08914728682 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88070036437 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5722805058 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5333333333 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219383508269 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726854481598 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455256194971 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14020492969 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358959135346 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.