You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of the year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quiet inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel giving details of what was wrong.
Explain what type had to do to overcome the problem at the time say
what action you would like the manager to take.
Hello
I am writing this letter to complaint regarding my stay at your Park View Hotel in California. I had huge inconveince during my stay here due to the faulty air-conditiong. The ventilation system was poorly configured for the humid weather at that time and was more chilling.
As a concomitant of having too cold temperature, I and my wife had to take extra blankets just to keep ourselves warm. In addition to that, the remote control was also fault and we were not able to do anything about it.
I would like you to take immeditate action and fix the damaged cooling system. Also, I would like you to take time and have proper and regular maintenace of all your facilities so that no faces any issues during their residence at your hotel.
Yours Faithfully
Robert
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 169, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'faulted'.
Suggestion: faulted
...on to that, the remote control was also fault and we were not able to do anything abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 658.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80291970803 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68642889498 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70802919708 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8627098163 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205478825745 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773474288246 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763514448029 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127916627157 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077654935505 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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