You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of the year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quiet inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel giving details of what was wrong.
Explain what type had to do to overcome the problem at the time say
what action you would like the manager to take.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing this letter to complaint regarding my stay at your Park View Hotel in California. I had huge inconvenience during my stay here due to the faulty air-conditioning. The ventilation system was poorly configured for the humid weather at that time and was more chilling which led to an uncomfortable vacation.
As a concomitant of having too cold temperature, me and my wife had to take extra blankets just to keep ourselves warm. In addition to that, the remote control was at fault and we were not able to do anything about it. When we contacted the front-desk for another room, they mentioned that all rooms are occupied.
I would request you to compensate me complete refund as a sign of apology. Furthermore, I would like you to take immediate action and fix the damaged cooling system. Also, hotel staff should take time and have proper and regular maintenance of all your facilities so that no one faces any issues during their residence at your hotel.
Yours faithfully
Robert
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91428571429 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86248643166 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9574079178 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200358886474 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623146134132 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601715589541 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128793059237 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672511235198 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.