You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:
– Describe what you left and where it happened.
– Why are these papers important?
– What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing in regards to a recent journey I made in a vehicle from your fleet on June 1st, 2018,
more specifically, from London Mayfair to Piccadilly station, starting around 4 pm and finishing 30 minutes later.
Immediately after entering the taxi that afternoon I immediately started reviewing some very important documents containing confidential client data. I have strong reason to believe I left these documents in
the cab upon reaching the destination.
These papers are of enormous value because of the information contained, and if they fall into the wrong hands there could be profoundly serious implications for myself, and possibly your firm too. The documents
concern an extremely sensitive governmental topic regarding national security, it is therefore of paramount
the importance they are found and returned to me as soon as possible.
As a result of this, I need your firm to check the security camera in the cab of the aforementioned date and time, and please send a copy to this email address: sample@sample.com. In addition, I would be terribly grateful
if you could forward the contact details of the driver as I would like to contact him before the situation spirals
out of control.
Your assistance in this matter is of dire importance, furthermore, I would like to believe we can solve this
between ourselves without the Police or MI5 interference.
Regards,
Mr. Worthington
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing in regards to a recent journey I made in a vehicle fr...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hicle from your fleet on June 1st, 2018, more specifically, from London Mayfair t...
^^^
Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...son to believe I left these documents in the cab upon reaching the destination. ...
^^^
Line 9, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd possibly your firm too. The documents concern an extremely sensitive governmen...
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Line 10, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l security, it is therefore of paramount the importance they are found and return...
^^^
Line 13, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n addition, I would be terribly grateful if you could forward the contact details...
^^^
Line 14, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...contact him before the situation spirals out of control. Your assistance in th...
^^^
Line 17, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would like to believe we can solve this between ourselves without the Police or ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28017241379 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08596524472 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685344827586 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3856907888 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.111111111 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153235080012 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051490832169 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419322516016 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043501269892 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05096399633 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 8.37731958763 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.