Dear sir .
The reason I am writing a letter to you is the poor quality of system which i bought from your store 2 weeks ago. After that the problems started to appear.
The first malfunction occur when i was uploading a file, i thought its due to internet serve problem precisely it got stuck every after an hour. The second thing i noticed that its battery was dam disgusting which needs charging all the day long.
Naturally i visited the store but unfortunately the executive replied that it cannot be repaired due to part unavailabilty in the market.They asked me to wait for the following two weeks and after 3 weeks the answer was the same.
I am amazed how many problem does a quiet expensive model has.
I am very disappointed with both the equipment and the service that i have received therefore I expect the full refund of 300 dollars as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir . The reason I am writing a letter to ...
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Dear sir . The reason I am writing a letter to you is the poor quality of s...
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...you is the poor quality of system which i bought from your store 2 weeks ago. Aft...
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...h i bought from your store 2 weeks ago. After that the problems started to appear. ...
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...ar. The first malfunction occur when i was uploading a file, i thought its due...
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...tion occur when i was uploading a file, i thought its due to internet serve probl...
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...k every after an hour. The second thing i noticed that its battery was dam disgus...
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...due to part unavailabilty in the market.They asked me to wait for the following tw...
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...ailabilty in the market.They asked me to wait for the following two weeks and af...
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...lty in the market.They asked me to wait for the following two weeks and after 3 ...
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...o weeks and after 3 weeks the answer was the same. I am amazed how many problem...
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... 3 weeks the answer was the same. I am amazed how many problem does a quiet exp...
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Suggestion: many problems
...answer was the same. I am amazed how many problem does a quiet expensive model has. I ...
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...odel has. I am very disappointed with both the equipment and the service that ...
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... both the equipment and the service that i have received therefore I expect the f...
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...as soon as possible. Yours faithfully XYZ
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...n as possible. Yours faithfully XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70625 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61414692194 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9718532887 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184939409885 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627121181543 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578922434727 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809788856518 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660303142966 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.