you rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students.however, there are several problems with this house that need fixing.you also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Dear Sir/Madam
I'm writing to explain about some problems with four-bedroom house that i rent and should be fixed.
I am a student with lots of my private issues and I have to work to meet my needs by myself.But, recently there have been some problems with my house.for instance; the roof of the kitchen is leaking, the washing machine stops working and there is something wrong with the bathroom tap that all of them should be fixed as soon as possible.
According to these expensive repairing and my low income and situation that I explained for you before, it would be better to share the spare bedroom with another student.
If you could help me, I would be so thankful.
i look forward to your reply.
your sincerely
Ghazal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir/Madam Im writing to explain about some problems ...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...have to work to meet my needs by myself.But, recently there have been some problems...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...could help me, I would be so thankful. i look forward to your reply. your sin...
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...could help me, I would be so thankful. i look forward to your reply. your sin...
^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...kful. i look forward to your reply. your sincerely Ghazal
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 613.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 130.0 206.0 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71538461538 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49616273555 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.793225826 44.8134815571 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282986831218 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116703388054 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103890452863 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144406532954 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100135951335 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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