You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Dear Sir,
I intend to write this letter to show my interest for participation in one-week walking tour arrange by your company. I always have keen interest in such tours; I had been an active participant in all such fitness activities, few years back. I used to win medals in competitions and have been recognized and honored by the community council as well.
With reference to this activity, I would like to inquire some information about the dates and required cost. How much do I have to pay? Does the payment have to be made fully upfront, or it can be paid after the event?. Furthermore, confirm me exact dates, starting and ending so I can plan my other tasks accordingly.
I would want to express my health concern before you. Couple of years back, I had a major car accident in which my back was badly hurt. I had to disengage myself from all such activities owing to my physical conditions; particularly backache. I am worried that my participation would not raise my backache issue again. I need your support to arrange medical facilitators at the event place so that I can be taken care of in case of any emergency.
I look forward to your outright response.
Yours Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "required cost" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'cost' or 'to be cost'.
Suggestion: cost; to be cost
...nformation about the dates and required cost. How much do I have to pay? Does the pa...
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Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould not raise my backache issue again. I need your support to arrange medical fa...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ken care of in case of any emergency. I look forward to your outright response....
^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur outright response. Yours Sincerely,
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, look, so, well, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67298578199 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77420857872 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672985781991 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8357933027 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8461538462 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106203227147 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347616256471 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498129986234 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539425343865 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358384168274 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.