You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
Dear John and Anne,
I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing to let you know that I have received the photographs of the Maldives holiday yesterday. It was such a wonderful time and trip together. I will cherish this journey forever. All the photographs are so beautiful.
I am afraid that i could not be able to write you before owing to my Chartered Accountancy examination which is due this month only. also, I told you that how important this course is for me not merely from career, growth perspective but to meet my parent's expectation and dreams. They have sacrificed their wishes and aspirations to properly raise me. Now I want them to just sit back and relax. I really have to work hard to get through this examination.
I hope you understand my situation. I would also ask you to come and spend some time in Delhi with my family. I assure that you have the best of your time here. There are so many good places to visit.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Misha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...phs are so beautiful. I am afraid that i could not be able to write you before o...
^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...amination which is due this month only. also, I told you that how important this cou...
^^^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I hope you understand my situation. I would also ask you to come and spend so...
^
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pend some time in Delhi with my family. I assure that you have the best of your t...
^
Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Misha
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49462365591 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54013909561 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7656776685 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.25 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.625 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315218201571 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912989432324 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681874675764 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17824443768 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468594848217 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.