You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear sir
I am a software developer in your India based company and I want to take part in the software testing seminar which is going to be on next month in the UK.
I am working in the development department and last week a saw email in our web portal. Our company is going to arrange a seminar in the United Kingdom. I always want to learn software testing but due to my busy schedule 9-5 job and taking care of kids, I never had a chance to attend any part-time course so I believe this is the golden opportunity for me to attend this seminar.
Furthermore, I want to know the exact dates of the seminar and what will be events/programs in the seminar. Moreover, if the company arranges accommodation for international candidates. if yes then what will be the cost. Do I need to submit any deposit to Book accommodation?
I am looking forward to your response.
your faithfully
sim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...mmodation for international candidates. if yes then what will be the cost. Do I ne...
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Line 6, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mmodation for international candidates. if yes then what will be the cost. Do I ne...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...am looking forward to your response. your faithfully sim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52760736196 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8707067957 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2373252192 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135164093749 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485370925998 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481948052208 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696286323464 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533242480045 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.