Dear Sir and Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I have borrowed a book from your library on 8 August but I lost it on a bus. I am hoping you would instruct me on how can I recompensate the lost book.
I am an international student and borrowed the book “Basic vision computation” on 8 August using my library card which the card ID is 12345678. However, I brought the book to visit my schoolmate the day before yesterday, I left the book on the bus. I contacted the bus company when I realized the missing book. Unfortunately, the staff of the bus company reported that they cannot find it as somebody may pick it up yesterday.
In this case, I am seeking your advice and would really appreciate your guidance regarding this. I will be ready to pay the full amount to buy a copy of the book if this is necessary.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ow can I recompensate the lost book. I am an international student and borrowe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44047619048 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73982864386 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0505201072 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345123598279 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130176932709 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884394162805 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200157311225 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920706028238 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.