You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 150 words.
You are not satisfied with the changing room in the sports center that you visit. Write a letter to the manager, in your letter say:
- what the problem is,
- how you feel about this problem,
- what steps you want the manager to take.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows
Dear Sir,
I am permanent member of city sports club and regularly visit the sports center and writing this letter regarding problem that newly constructed changing room persists.
Although, design and décor of changing place is awesome, the basis facilities are missing. Firstly, the changing room does not have any water outlay and causing water clogging all the time. Most the time, it can be found wet or filled with water since it also used by the swimmers. Secondly, there are no lockers available for keeping the valuable items and sometime things get dropped while changing.
I believe that these are quite normal features that are expected in any changing room. Further, all members paid 500 pounds for improving sports centre and I personally feel like that money gone in vain.
I request you to look into these problems and provide expedite solution in order to maintain the whole facility at high standard. A qualified architect or interior designer can be consulted for solution.
I am looking forward to getting acknowledgement on resolution of these issues.
Yours Faithfully,
Chama
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am permanent member of city sports clu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19553072626 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57293958378 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.731843575419 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5678276738 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167119611186 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470060190672 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577026000847 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790815880286 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705472686963 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.