You spent your vacation abroad and your friend sent you pictures of your holidays together. Write a letter to them and invite them over .
Hi Ben and Bim,
Trust you both are doing great? I'm writing to thank you for the awesome holiday and for those lovely pictures of our holidays together which you just sent. Spending my vacation with you guys was really an eye-opener and Australia is a scenic place with beautiful landscape especially down south where you live.
Sorry, I haven't been able to write earlier, immediately I came back from the trip, my mother took ill and we've been running around, sorting out hospital. I thank God she is much stable now and recuperating.
Lest I forget, my wedding anniversary is coming up next Month, 21st of December and I'm hoping both of you can attend our wedding anniversary and spend your Christmas vacation with us. We just moved to Toronto and you will love it here because it won't be that cold around the time and you can use the opportunity to visit University of Calgary, remember you told me you would like to do a post-graduate studies next year.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Warm regards,
Babe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... down south where you live. Sorry, I havent been able to write earlier, immediately...
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...k from the trip, my mother took ill and weve been running around, sorting out hospit...
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...ing up next Month, 21st of December and Im hoping both of you can attend our weddi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69613259669 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46830894895 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701657458564 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8114815951 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240032119802 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822339212048 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650145294714 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125609564842 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774931784452 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.