You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. write a letter to the hotel manager and saywhen and where did you stay?describe your clothes?what would you like the manager to do about it?

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You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. write a letter to the hotel manager and say
when and where did you stay?
describe your clothes?
what would you like the manager to do about it?

Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you about my clothes which I forgot in your hotel during my last stay.
I am a regular visitor of your property as my organisation is having a contract with your hotel. Firstly, I would like to let you know that I had stayed in your hotel last week from 2nd to 7th, February. Secondly, my room number which I occupied was '339'.
Furthermore, I have kept my clothes in rooms cupboard. These clothes are kept in hotel laundry bag. It contains a black jacket, a shirt which is white in colour and a black trouser.
Although I know that someone from your side will inform about my clothes to me. I would like to request you to keep my clothes in your custody. I will be visiting your hotel week again, at that time I will collect them.
Anticipating for your coöperation and I am sorry for the inconvenience caused to you.
Yours faithfully,
Steve Smith

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about my clot...
^^^
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: white
...ntains a black jacket, a shirt which is white in colour and a black trouser. Although I know ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is white in colour and a black trouser. Although I know that someone from your side will...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ience caused to you. Yours faithfully, Steve Smith
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43902439024 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53690781253 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2862620444 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.6666666667 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374297207738 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14094946027 0.0766984524023 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104293404163 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217702464544 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978855343436 0.0580467560999 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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