You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. write a letter to the hotel manager and say
when and where did you stay?
describe your clothes?
what would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir,
My name is Vishal Bhat, I had a stay in your hotel last week, dated 15 September to 21 September. I was staying in room no. 7, 2nd floor, Avenue hotel, Pune. I am writing this letter with regards to the information of my clothes, which I forgot to carry after leaving hotel room.
Clothes included 2 jeans, 1 pent, 2 shirts and 4 pair of socks. Jeans color is blue of both, and shirt is in white with red strips and another one is plain white in color. Pent is formal with black color and dotted lines.
It is my request to look for the clothes as I need them in coming conference in Delhi and the shirt with red strips was gifted by my wife. Please courier them once you discover at my home address Doha street, Delhi. I hope you will them in the cupboard of bedroom. My home address is mentioned at the back of the letter.
I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Vishal Bhat, I had a stay in ...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pair' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pairs'.
Suggestion: pairs
...ncluded 2 jeans, 1 pent, 2 shirts and 4 pair of socks. Jeans color is blue of both, ...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: white
...ith red strips and another one is plain white in color. Pent is formal with black color and do...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31460674157 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19325727574 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64606741573 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7588901513 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0769230769 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204584118242 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683595424187 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366919361171 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969953616982 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622043952686 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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