You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. write a letter to the hotel manager and saywhen and where did you stay?describe your clothes?what would you like the manager to do about it?

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You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. write a letter to the hotel manager and say
when and where did you stay?
describe your clothes?
what would you like the manager to do about it?

Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to let you know about my apparel that I recently forgot to collect from room during my stay at your establishment.
The room which I booked was Prinston ensuite number 204 for last Saturday and Sunday. I believe I left my clothes in wardrobe this is because I forgot to check it before moving out.
The clothes that I am talking about is a Burberry trench coat with trouser. It has a deep blue colour with red stripes on it.
would it please be possible for your staff to locate my coat? I would be highly grateful if you could make it early because I am planing to wear my trench suit this weekend. You can kindly contact me on 000000000. I can come in personally to collect my apparel.
Awaiting a prompt response. I hope you can help me.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ ABC

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to let you know about my ap...
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...m during my stay at your establishment. The room which I booked was Prinston ens...
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...I forgot to check it before moving out. The clothes that I am talking about is a...
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...eep blue colour with red stripes on it. would it please be possible for your sta...
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...hope you can help me. Yours sincerely, XYZ ABC
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, talking about, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36666666667 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41632411365 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4191456059 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.5833333333 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224362645254 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707908386818 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649289494166 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11385435152 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750769859506 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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