You stayed at your friends' house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.Task: Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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You stayed at your friends' house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.
Task: Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear Amit,

Hope you are doing well. Although the flight was very tiring and hectic, still I am not feeling any jet lag. I had reached home yesterday morning and went to sleep immediately after putting my bags. After having a good amount of sleep I thought of doing the unpacking. And then unfortunately while unpacking I realized, I forgot one of my extremely important documents file at your home.

Do you remember I was in your room one night before the business seminar? I suspect I left it there on the study table and forgot to pack. The File is black and is slightly heavy as it contains all my certificates, degrees and, important papers. I might require them next week while going to give an interview. Hence, would like to request you if you could check the postage charges for this file to India and let me know. I will share you my home address in my next letter and will pay you the charges before-hand. This would be a great help from your side.

Thank you in advance.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Warm regards
Monika Goswami</span><br>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...leep immediately after putting my bags. After having a good amount of sleep I thought...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, still, then, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77835051546 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04537984485 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675257731959 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0425074168 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.8 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9333333333 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29786533456 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888941190604 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841398072179 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123018901406 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101868609906 0.0580467560999 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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