You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with my visit to your restaurant last week. I faced plenty of problems while eating dinner with my wife. Since it was her birthday, we had special plans for the night but they were ruined by a miserable dinner.
The ingredients of the dishes seemed stale especially the cheese that we were served in starters. We had to chew it continuously over long period of time before swallowing. Even a common item like lentils tasted poorly containing very high amount of salt. Though the food was served within short time, but almost each one of those seemed like they were semi-cooked.
I believe you should talk to your cook so that he or she can ensure that only properly cooked food is served to the table. Secondly, I felt the food was cooked beforehand and was only heated to serve us quickly. This led to some key raw materials tasting like they were not fresh which does not suit the image of high price restaurant like yours. Once cooked, your team should also check if the basic composition of food is balanced by checking level of salt, spice and other such items.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest about the changes I would find the next time I plan to visit your restaurant!
Yours faithfully,
Atul Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey were ruined by a miserable dinner. The ingredients of the dishes seemed sta...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e had to chew it continuously over long period of time before swallowing. Even a common item l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6347826087 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33442228618 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7009242979 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8333333333 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128281341694 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042336261755 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384236368507 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812572041131 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337670366505 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.