You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the services of your restaurant on my visit with my family yesterday.
I booked a table at your restaurant to celebrate my brother’s promotion at his work. Therefore, I planned to give a treat to our family and end up visiting your restaurant.
Your place is one of the renowned places is our city, so my expectations were high. However, it does not meet with the fame of your name. To be more precise, the tandoori chicken we ordered was not fully cooked and the curry served to us was having soury texture. Other than uncooked and spoiled curry, I would like to point out customer service, the waiter was behaving kind of rudely.
Although the food was replaced, it is not good for the name of the hotel. As we live in a small city, these things spread fast and there is a strong possibility that you may lose customers. That is why, I would like to suggest that you might need to hire more chefs and also need to hire trained waiters. Other than that, everything is up to the mark.
I hope you may soon make said changes in your restaurant. I would like to be hearing from you soon with said changes otherwise you already lost a customer.
Yours faithfully,
Sheldon Cooper
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ges in your restaurant. I would like to be hearing from you soon with said changes otherwi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55263157895 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5204152584 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4435029466 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1428571429 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265891829557 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766208765386 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648381635952 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137605022909 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06405923571 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.