You traveled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe you suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it
Dear Sirs,
I took a flight from Karachi to Islamabad on 1st May, 2018. When I board the plane, there was few minutes left for aircraft to take off. There was bit of a chaos and passengers were asked to find there seats and be seated as soon as possible. On of the flight attendant asked me to hand over my hand carry suit case to him to keep it safely and in the meantime I must be seated. After the flight was landed, I was told by the aircraft crew that I'll get my suit case along with my rest of luggage from the luggage collection lounge. But I couldn't find it there either. I explained this to your luggage officer but haven't heard from him as of now.
It's been missing for last one week. My suit case was red American Tourist, whose size was 18 by 30 inches. There is an airline tag attached on one side with my name and flight number written on it
There are few important work related documents in that suitcase which I need for the conference on 18th May, 2018.
I would deeply appreciate if you could give me promt reply at your earliest convenience. My flight number, luggage claim number and address are given below.
Flight No: PK-708
Luggage Claim No: 248
Address: House# 204, Block-10, Nazimabad, Karachi.
Yours faithfully,
Nusrah Naeem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sirs, I took a flight from Karachi to Islamaba...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2018'.
Suggestion: May 2018
...flight from Karachi to Islamabad on 1st May, 2018. When I board the plane, there was few ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...eft for aircraft to take off. There was bit of a chaos and passengers were asked to...
^^^
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...om the luggage collection lounge. But I couldnt find it there either. I explained this ...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...lained this to your luggage officer but havent heard from him as of now. Its been ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d American Tourist, whose size was 18 by 30 inches. There is an airline tag attac...
^^
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my name and flight number written on it There are few important work related doc...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2018'.
Suggestion: May 2018
...which I need for the conference on 18th May, 2018. I would deeply appreciate if you co...
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Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... earliest convenience. My flight number, luggage claim number and address are giv...
^^
Line 15, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Nazimabad, Karachi. Yours faithfully, Nusrah Naeem
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52586206897 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24819917364 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6395207733 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147567097086 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499715566811 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325521620026 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533557040372 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456062232725 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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