You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo

Dear Sir,

I am writing you to inquire about the suitcase which i have lost on 22nd January in the A9456 Delhi flight. Actually, when the flight has arrived in Manglore airport my suitcase did not come out and came to know that it's stolen from your airport staff in baggage claim area.

The bag is new and medium sized with its brand name ' JJ ' written on the top center. The handle itself has a golden case and it is number locked. There is only few accessories,a brand new packed mobile phone and some documents. Actually the documents are very important,related to my Job. I got a good support from your information center but no further contact from your officials. Actually, i am disappointment because i do not get any details regarding this.

So, i need to know the current status of my complaint and wish to hear the updates. Here i mentioned my contact details to keep in touch with. Please make the necessary as soon as possible.

I look forward to hear from you.

Akshaya
0011-36544

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...new and medium sized with its brand name JJ written on the top center. The handl...
^^
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and medium sized with its brand name JJ written on the top center. The handle it...
^^
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...er locked. There is only few accessories,a brand new packed mobile phone and some ...
^^
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , related
...ctually the documents are very important,related to my Job. I got a good support from yo...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... contact from your officials. Actually, i am disappointment because i do not get ...
^
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... Actually, i am disappointment because i do not get any details regarding this. ...
^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... get any details regarding this. So, i need to know the current status of my c...
^
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...aint and wish to hear the updates. Here i mentioned my contact details to keep in...
^
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... as soon as possible. I look forward to hear from you. Akshaya 0011-36544
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66292134831 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62681154089 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691011235955 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5500386517 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1666666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148616494125 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039892756147 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536277742387 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089194938901 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639689111479 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.