Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the services provided by your airline company, during my last travel about two weeks ago, from India to Bahamas. Although the flight was fine, my luggage got lost on my arrival.
I took a two way flight from India to Bahamas, from your airlines on 15th of this month. I had no issues reaching Bahamas and the luggage was given to me on time. After completing my three day visit there, I returned to India on 18th of this month. Although the services provided were fantastic during the flight, I was surprised to have found that my luggage is missing.
I was carrying a blue bag and a suitcase. The bag had my laptop and other important official documents which I had to submit at my office on reaching. The suitcase, had my clothes, hard disk, and other random things. Although the clothes are not important, but the hard disk is very important for me.
When I contacted your representative, they told me that it must have got left out while picking luggage from Bahamas and it will be returned back to me within a week. I was a bit hazy but they provided me the assurance that within a week they shall call me and return me back the suitcase.
Naturally, I waited for the call, but after ten days, I was bound to return to the airlines. On reaching there, I was told that they have not received any such complaint and hence, no action was taken place. I then asked them to call the person who assured me ten days back. Imagine my feelings when I learned from him that there has been no action taken since they were busy with other important customers. When I tried to contact you by phone, no one could offer me any sensible answer. As a solution he offered that I wait for another one month, before I receive the luggage.
I am very disappointed with your airlines and expect that my luggage be returned as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
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- You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo 73
- You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...ing luggage from Bahamas and it will be returned back to me within a week. I was a bit hazy b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 32.9175257732 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 937.175257732 169% => OK
No of words: 350.0 206.0 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52571428571 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48207286643 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 127.690721649 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517142857143 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 1.83505154639 436% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5703007707 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3684210526 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78947368421 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174279041673 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573791167319 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463470117821 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946479155959 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419405739764 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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