Dear John,
The last time we met you expressed your interest in buying a television. You will be pleased to know that i have decided to buy a new television since I have bought a new gaming console. The console is not compatible with the television that I have right now.
I was wondering if you could buy the existing one from me. The television is a 32 inches colored piece with a sound output of 200 watts. It's just 5 years old and has left around 1 million viewing hours. I think it will be a good deal for you since i am ready to sell this off cheaply.
If you want to have a look at the television, you can come over to my place next Saturday afternoon. We can catch-up over a game of football and you can check the television on your own. This will give you a confidence and will ascertain that it's a genuine television.
Do give me a call, once to you recieve this letter.
Yours truly,
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nk it will be a good deal for you since i am ready to sell this off cheaply. I...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: LOOK_WATCH[3]
Message: Did you mean 'watch'?
Suggestion: watch
...s off cheaply. If you want to have a look at the television, you can come over to...
^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ou a confidence and will ascertain that its a genuine television. Do give me a c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24571428571 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41953950755 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2091935807 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.9166666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345576240546 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121499083407 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882344801385 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185814438222 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776213915608 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.