You want to study a course in the local college. You already Road chatter about the same to the principal of the college but you have not yet replied any reply to your letter
Write a letter to the principal in your letter
.Detail of the course
.why should want to study in that college only
.request him/her to give an early reply
Dear sir
I am a student. I was completed my graduation last year. I am writing this letter to seek a formation about Mca course in your college.
As a student, I want to in role in MCA course in your college. It was a three year course. I would be grateful if you tell me about fees structure of this course.since four years I am waiting on daytime far and all the Masters course in your collage. Because in enrolment in and see in your Institute it is my dream. Because there are many facilities for students and their staff departments you also experienced in future there are much chance for jobs.
I request to you if you give me a reply soon. So that I can arrange my funds for study in your esteemed college.
Yours faithfully
Aman 30 January 2018
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... was completed my graduation last year. I am writing this letter to seek a format...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...future there are much chance for jobs. I request to you if you give me a reply ...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur esteemed college. Yours faithfully Aman ...
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Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed college. Yours faithfully Aman 30 January 2018
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 628.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39160839161 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55147984338 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643356643357 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4088608236 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0909090909 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285808032166 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100069738598 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079025703405 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147888052227 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972255294808 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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